James loves waterfalls and was excited to see one. But even better after his taxi ride it was raining heavily at the waterfall. Next he went home and sold some of his apples, ate dinner and slept in his yellow bed. In the next day he visited more waterfalls but sadly the one he went to was closed but, he was on a vacation with one of his best friends and he got to see and take pictures of a few waterfalls. When he got home from his vacation he was very happy and so was his friend.
The end.
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Kiera
Hello Desmond, I love going to see waterfalls too. Unfortunately sometimes they are difficult to get to, but usually worth it. I think you have used some really good adjectives and adverbs in this story. Well done.