One day there was a factory in the phone industry and it caught on fire everyone had to evacuate there where red lights and everyone was afraid. The firemen got a urgent call from a worker but they were not fast enough to save the factory lucky other factory’s where saved and the one that was burned down was rebuilt. Afterwords the factory’s kept expanding but if one place it would always burn down no-one knew why until the workers found someone trying to set the factory on fire! They where arrested and the factories stoped burning down forever
Hi Desmond,
What a wonderful piece, filled with detail, and it seems like other factories were very lucky to escape the fire. Thankfully they managed to find the person responsible for it all too. Thank you for all your hard work.
Hello Desmond,
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